Friends Revenge (First Story) (X)
Hi I am new here and this is my first time doing one of these stories so hope you like it. This is a fantasy story. It all started when we were at a rock concert with a group of friends, Holly was a...
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Ah, Ethanconn, I remember seeing this posted and wanted to read it, but then I forgot! Try to break up more in paragraphs, that makes it easier. I'm not really into the "bitchy girl commands you to...
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Thanks for the feedback mate. Yeah I will keep that in mind for my next story. As you can probably tell I like domination.
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Whatever floats your boat! I like to be "dominated" too but not in the extreme like in these stories. I don't want to be insulted, etc... So maybe for your next story it could be a challenge to write...
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I liked it, and I think the bitchy girl worked here in the context of the story. She was pretty pissed off with him after all!
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Yeah I could give it a go. Yeah she wasn't happy that's why it was as much, might do a follow up to this story.
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I agree with Ilcattivo, I am not really into insulting domination. But again, whatever floats your boat, eh? It was a nice read, nonetheless!
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We're all freaks in our own way on this wonderful board, so let your imagination go wild :) Good story! A little clumped together, but other than that, really nice!
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Not keen on fiction but would would love to know who the female is in your avatar? Thanks, gb
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Don't tone down the domination, this was really good.
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I am going to write another soon, and don't worry there will be just as much domination.
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Yep I'm right there with you for the humiliation/domination style, so hot. Personally it's the best and gets me going when it comes to footplay, it adds to the experience. Thanks for sharing!
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